I do like the song, but I think it took too long to pick up. Also, you might want to use a more powerful or louder kick drum. And if you don't have one already, get a limiter. Pretty cool song, anyway.
I really like the melody and the beat, but there are a couple things about it that stop it short of being amazing. First, there were a few points in the song where it sounds like you missed a note or something, probably want to avoid that. Also the song is entirely lacking in bass, maybe when you make a song try playing the bass an octave lower. The bass makes the song deeper and fuller, so without it it just sounds... not right. Other than those two things, the song is really great and I would have rated it perfect.
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